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Title : The Line Author : Traversing the Dark Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot : : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: : “Who’s arm is it anyway?” Tags: $Review Swap$, Read to Chapter 5 - Because that's all that was written! (WIP) SUMMARY : A special niece, two brothers, and a twisted special operations force. Set in ye olden times in a backwater of a world, monsters roam to plague mankind - some monsters use other monsters to rid the world. PROS: The scenes and characters are well put together, you are met with Bran, Oswald, and Amalia a family of monsters I am sure. There is a secret cabal of silver-masked individuals who are running a werewolf hunter group, where they use the wolves to hunt other things that go bump in the night. No grammar errors I could detect. CONS: I just need more! BEST LINE: You said, “Home, Bran? We don’t go home. - Oswald OVERALL: Good for a start, you get a lot in the first three chapters, and the extended two-chapter action sequence is good. Should be a good Halloween read by the time the event comes.

Title : Peserved In Ink Author : Adalia S. Lansthrone Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot : : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: My Time in highscool? Tags: $Review Swap$, Read to Chapter 6 - Because that's all that was wrote! (WIP) (^) Overall: Teen Drama! The story is set in high school, with all of the youthful characters well presented. The story is still in development, so still looking to see where the tale sends the reader. I will continue to follow this story and check back once in a while for developments. (^) Pros: Character development is outstanding. I enjoyed the little nuances of school life. The descriptions place you right into the location providing good visuals. (^)Cons: I just need more! (^)Best Line: "I am cold, I want a nice steaming cup of tea."

Title : The Broken Angel Author : Beth Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot : : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: Broken Wings Tags: Review Swap, Read to Chapter 4 (WIP) ^^Overall^^ Will take another look after a while, not much to work with on for a review at this time. So this will be "First Impression" type Review. Has a bit mystery going on with some prophetic dark dreams our MC Miss Smith has been having. As of Chapter 4 the dream becomes a reality. ^^Pros^^ At this point in the story you could be going for Sci-Fi or Fantasy, as one hero enters into a house way ahead of the current tech curb for the area. The writing is fluid and characters are easily discernable. A minor villain is introduced in Chapter 2, and he is somebody you can absolutely hate. ^^Cons^^ Still in early stages being written as author stated so reformatting and corrections will happen to make the reading a bit more easier. ^^Best Line^^ "Obviously this was a mistake, I have to be going, if you will please excuse me." - Miss Smith.