Finished Reviews
Title : The Line Author : Traversing the Dark Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot : : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: : “Who’s arm is it anyway?” Tags: $Review Swap$, Read to Chapter 5 - Because that's all that was written! (WIP) SUMMARY : A special niece, two brothers, and a twisted special operations force. Set in ye olden times in a backwater of a world, monsters roam to plague mankind - some monsters use other monsters to rid the world. PROS: The scenes and characters are well put together, you are met with Bran, Oswald, and Amalia a family of monsters I am sure. There is a secret cabal of silver-masked individuals who are running a werewolf hunter group, where they use the wolves to hunt other things that go bump in the night. No grammar errors I could detect. CONS: I just need more! BEST LINE: You said, “Home, Bran? We don’t go home. - Oswald OVERALL: Good for a start, you get a lot in the first three chapters, and the extended two-chapter action sequence is good. Should be a good Halloween read by the time the event comes.
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