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Title : Peserved In Ink Author : Adalia S. Lansthrone Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot : : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: My Time in highscool? Tags: $Review Swap$, Read to Chapter 6 - Because that's all that was wrote! (WIP) (^) Overall: Teen Drama! The story is set in high school, with all of the youthful characters well presented. The story is still in development, so still looking to see where the tale sends the reader. I will continue to follow this story and check back once in a while for developments. (^) Pros: Character development is outstanding. I enjoyed the little nuances of school life. The descriptions place you right into the location providing good visuals. (^)Cons: I just need more! (^)Best Line: "I am cold, I want a nice steaming cup of tea."

Title : The Broken Angel Author : Beth Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot : : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: Broken Wings Tags: Review Swap, Read to Chapter 4 (WIP) ^^Overall^^ Will take another look after a while, not much to work with on for a review at this time. So this will be "First Impression" type Review. Has a bit mystery going on with some prophetic dark dreams our MC Miss Smith has been having. As of Chapter 4 the dream becomes a reality. ^^Pros^^ At this point in the story you could be going for Sci-Fi or Fantasy, as one hero enters into a house way ahead of the current tech curb for the area. The writing is fluid and characters are easily discernable. A minor villain is introduced in Chapter 2, and he is somebody you can absolutely hate. ^^Cons^^ Still in early stages being written as author stated so reformatting and corrections will happen to make the reading a bit more easier. ^^Best Line^^ "Obviously this was a mistake, I have to be going, if you will please excuse me." - Miss Smith.

Title : The Archeological Chronicles Author : Time Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot : : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: Mars Needs Women Tags: Review Swap, WIP read to Chapter 18 ^^Overall^^ I did enjoy the story. I can see the difference between the characters. We follow our heroine Mari as she is forced to leave her home. Being abducted by Ka'ine, he's not entirely human but by a race of older aliens. Mari tries to make the best of a bad situation. ^^Pros^^ In true sci-fi fashion, some nice world-building using different aliens and a new culture to explore similar themes of good old Earth. No hard grammar issues, easy to read and follow the story and plot. I do like how the MC kinda knows what Ka'ine is trying to do and tries her best to survive a very bad ordeal. ^^Cons^^ Sometimes a little too political for my taste. Differently some dark aspects to the reasoning behind the abduction. ^^Best Line^^ "An alien over ten thousand years. Great. This makes things a lot easier for me." - Mari