Title : NARIO
Author : Zo__RK
Category : Action/Romance
Inkitt : Why I am not in the Mafia
Tags : (Work in Progress) (Review Swap:2020-01-11)
Pros : Detailed Characters are a plus. Lively and Brutal as villains go, there is no shortage of supply, just pick the worst. The scenes are detailed, I can picture where the author has placed the reader. The story is constructed well enough.
Cons : Punctuation took a hit, only because I recognized some of the same flaws in my own work, not a deal breaker.
Overall: With only few chapters to work with, I don't know where the story is going yet. Much like nobles, arranged marriages and such, and a very unlucky gal who has to me married off to a crazy sob. This does leave me to want to punch Nario in the head. Happy Ending in a Mafia family? Only time will tell. More work is going to be needed, and this is a dark story to tread down. Violence can be found in a number of chapters, it's a tell of the criminals underworld, so be prepared.