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    timidon1
    Apr 04

    The Broken Angel by Beth

    Title : The Broken Angel

    Author : Beth


    Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟

    Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

    Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

    Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟


    Inkitt Title: Broken Wings


    Tags: Review Swap, Read to Chapter 4 (WIP)


    ^^Overall^^

    Will take another look after a while, not much to work with on for a review at this time. So this will be "First Impression" type Review. Has a bit mystery going on with some prophetic dark dreams our MC Miss Smith has been having. As of Chapter 4 the dream becomes a reality.

    ^^Pros^^ At this point in the story you could be going for Sci-Fi or Fantasy, as one hero enters into a house way ahead of the current tech curb for the area. The writing is fluid and characters are easily discernable. A minor villain is introduced in Chapter 2, and he is somebody you can absolutely hate.

    ^^Cons^^

    Still in early stages being written as author stated so reformatting and corrections will happen to make the reading a bit more easier.

    ^^Best Line^^

    "Obviously this was a mistake, I have to be going, if you will please excuse me." - Miss Smith.


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