Title : The Broken Angel
Author : Beth
Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟
Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟
Inkitt Title: Broken Wings
Tags: Review Swap, Read to Chapter 4 (WIP)
^^Overall^^
Will take another look after a while, not much to work with on for a review at this time. So this will be "First Impression" type Review. Has a bit mystery going on with some prophetic dark dreams our MC Miss Smith has been having. As of Chapter 4 the dream becomes a reality.
^^Pros^^ At this point in the story you could be going for Sci-Fi or Fantasy, as one hero enters into a house way ahead of the current tech curb for the area. The writing is fluid and characters are easily discernable. A minor villain is introduced in Chapter 2, and he is somebody you can absolutely hate.
^^Cons^^
Still in early stages being written as author stated so reformatting and corrections will happen to make the reading a bit more easier.
^^Best Line^^
"Obviously this was a mistake, I have to be going, if you will please excuse me." - Miss Smith.