Title : The Broken Angel
Author : Beth
Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟
Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟
Inkitt Title: Broken Wings
Tags: Review Swap, Read to Chapter 4 (WIP)
Will take another look after a while, not much to work with on for a review at this time. So this will be "First Impression" type Review. Has a bit mystery going on with some prophetic dark dreams our MC Miss Smith has been having. As of Chapter 4 the dream becomes a reality.
^^Pros^^ At this point in the story you could be going for Sci-Fi or Fantasy, as one hero enters into a house way ahead of the current tech curb for the area. The writing is fluid and characters are easily discernable. A minor villain is introduced in Chapter 2, and he is somebody you can absolutely hate.
Still in early stages being written as author stated so reformatting and corrections will happen to make the reading a bit more easier.
"Obviously this was a mistake, I have to be going, if you will please excuse me." - Miss Smith.