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timidon1
Mar 03, 2022
In Finished Reviews
Title : The Line Author : Traversing the Dark Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: : “Who’s arm is it anyway?” Tags: $Review Swap$, Read to Chapter 5 - Because that's all that was written! (WIP) SUMMARY: A special niece, two brothers, and a twisted special operations force. Set in ye olden times in a backwater of a world, monsters roam to plague mankind - some monsters use other monsters to rid the world. PROS: The scenes and characters are well put together, you are met with Bran, Oswald, and Amalia a family of monsters I am sure. There is a secret cabal of silver-masked individuals who are running a werewolf hunter group, where they use the wolves to hunt other things that go bump in the night. No grammar errors I could detect. CONS: I just need more! BEST LINE: You said, “Home, Bran? We don’t go home. - Oswald OVERALL: Good for a start, you get a lot in the first three chapters, and the extended two-chapter action sequence is good. Should be a good Halloween read by the time the event comes.
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timidon1
Apr 15, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Title : Peserved In Ink Author : Adalia S. Lansthrone Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: My Time in highscool? Tags: $Review Swap$, Read to Chapter 6 - Because that's all that was wrote! (WIP) (^) Overall: Teen Drama! The story is set in high school, with all of the youthful characters well presented. The story is still in development, so still looking to see where the tale sends the reader. I will continue to follow this story and check back once in a while for developments. (^) Pros: Character development is outstanding. I enjoyed the little nuances of school life. The descriptions place you right into the location providing good visuals. (^)Cons: I just need more! (^)Best Line: "I am cold, I want a nice steaming cup of tea."
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timidon1
Apr 04, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Title : The Broken Angel Author : Beth Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: Broken Wings Tags: Review Swap, Read to Chapter 4 (WIP) ^^Overall^^ Will take another look after a while, not much to work with on for a review at this time. So this will be "First Impression" type Review. Has a bit mystery going on with some prophetic dark dreams our MC Miss Smith has been having. As of Chapter 4 the dream becomes a reality. ^^Pros^^ At this point in the story you could be going for Sci-Fi or Fantasy, as one hero enters into a house way ahead of the current tech curb for the area. The writing is fluid and characters are easily discernable. A minor villain is introduced in Chapter 2, and he is somebody you can absolutely hate. ^^Cons^^ Still in early stages being written as author stated so reformatting and corrections will happen to make the reading a bit more easier. ^^Best Line^^ "Obviously this was a mistake, I have to be going, if you will please excuse me." - Miss Smith.
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timidon1
Apr 04, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Title : The Archeological Chronicles Author : Time Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: Mars Needs Women Tags: Review Swap, WIP read to Chapter 18 ^^Overall^^ I did enjoy the story. I can see the difference between the characters. We follow our heroine Mari as she is forced to leave her home. Being abducted by Ka'ine, he's not entirely human but by a race of older aliens. Mari tries to make the best of a bad situation. ^^Pros^^ In true sci-fi fashion, some nice world-building using different aliens and a new culture to explore similar themes of good old Earth. No hard grammar issues, easy to read and follow the story and plot. I do like how the MC kinda knows what Ka'ine is trying to do and tries her best to survive a very bad ordeal. ^^Cons^^ Sometimes a little too political for my taste. Differently some dark aspects to the reasoning behind the abduction. ^^Best Line^^ "An alien over ten thousand years. Great. This makes things a lot easier for me." - Mari
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timidon1
Apr 03, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Title : Released Author : Shub Agar Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: A Canvas of Sorrows Tags: Review Swap, 1 Chapter about 40 pages. ^^Pros^^ A nice story with a bit of dark twist, well worded the author paints an interested naritive. ^^Cons^^ Sometimes a bit hard to follow. Could be broken into a few additional chapters at scene changes. ^^Best Line^^ "I known authors who do not simply plot their manuscripts." ^^Overall^^ Enjoyed the short story.
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timidon1
Feb 25, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Title : Accodemtal Passion Author : Ultimate Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: What starts in Vegas Tags: WIP, Review Swap, Read to Chapter 5 (That's all at the review) ^^Pros^^ Enjoyed the story so far, classic friends heading to Vegas to have a good time. Dragging the responsible one back to blow off some stress and get out of the winter wonderland they were living all in. Characters are well written and the setting is sound enough that I can follow where the author leads. Once I got started, I found I wanted to keep turning the pages. ^^Cons^^ At this point is that there is only 5 chapters. This will change as the author adds more to the work. ^^Best Line^^ "Oh, Beckett what did you do last night. . . " - Beckett. ^^Overall^^ A good piece of work. I hope the author keeps working on this piece.
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timidon1
Feb 24, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Title : The Gathering Author : Gabriel Garcia Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Inkitt Title: A Spartan, a Roman, and a Viking enter the Bar! ^^Tags^^ (Review to Chapter 13, Review Swap) ^^Pros^^ I love crossword fantasy, bringing different elements together from different time periods. This story does just that, you get classics like the Spartans, Romans, Vikings, and a host of other warriors. All being summoned from a near-death experience to aid in the quest. The battle scenes are nicely put together, and clearly understandable. ^^Cons^^ Not many, to think of offhand, I can follow the story just fine. Characters are unique, to say the least. Favorite Character: Tyra Dragon Eyes, a Viking gal with a dangerous set of clubs. ^^Overall^^ A mix of fantasy and reality, one of my favorite cups of tea! Will add a list of continue reading. Cheers to the Author.
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timidon1
Feb 21, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Book : Silent Witness Authors Page : Kim Applegryn Title : Rock, Flower, Tree! Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (Tags: WIP, Review Swap, reviewed to Chapter 13) ^Description^ Where to begin? I highly recommend getting ahold of the map provided by the author, the experience will be enhanced as you trace your own finger to the places mentioned in this new world. Worldbuilding. The author has built a new world, creating a stage for a big conflict. First, you are treated to small pieces of history with a little interaction between gods and mortals. The gods have their own personalities, then the mortals come into play. ^Pros^ A fun piece covers a large territory of building a conflict. Has moments of time passing, and an epic world being built. The description of the gods, their environment is absolutely amazing, like a rich set dressing on a movie. ^Cons^ Not many, sometimes I got myself lost on where I was at (recommended the map out when reading). ^Overall^ Great! I plan on going through the rest of this work. And am considering purchase myself. ^Favorite Character^ The Goddess Montina, bandits don't and gods just don't mix. By far this goddess has a twisted sense of humor! ^Favorite Villian^ Still Too soon to find my favorite villain, but the most despicable would be the god Veronto, the god of war. ^Favorite Quote^ "Right! Now! Who would like to be a rock or a flower?!" - Montina Last Note: This is now one of my new favorites!
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timidon1
Feb 16, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Book : My half Damon Authors Page : l_a_ruel Title : Somebody Save Me! and me! Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟 (Tags: WIP, reviewed to Chapter 11) Description: A pair of sisters are moving out into the world,. The family they have lived with has secrets they have kept hidden all their lives. When reaching out to a friend, they get jobs and move away to a big city, where Tiara's life is turned upside down, revealing that she has a choice to make about who she is and what she can do. Pros: World Building is there; I get an idea of what and where the author wants to take me. Characters have distinct personalities, always a plus. Divine beings always a plus. We got werewolves and an idea of their hierarchy. Cons: The author is still working on her English as the language is not her primary. Many mistakes in grammar and punctuation are spelled correctly but often used in the wrong way. That I can chop this up to learning the language; this makes the story a challenging read. Overall: It has potential, will require heavy editing and reworking to make the story more palatable. Favorite Character: Tiara, the main protagonist, we are following her journey. Favorite Villian: Sierra, sneaky rat. I was not expecting her to be someone who was going betray the sisters; I thought of her as a friend. I don't know exactly what they were planning, but it did not look good. Last Note: Keep writing and practicing, and I can see a difference between the first chapter and the last that I read., I will review the books a little later to see what new improvements you make. Good luck and keep writing; remember you only get better by practice.
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timidon1
Feb 10, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Book : Book 1: The Sprout (Flower on the Riverbank) Authors Page : l_a_ruel Inkitt Review : Title : Romance Booming in a Country far, far away Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Pros: A nice slice of life, nobody getting directly down and dirty. Most of the romances I read, allot of hooking up is already happening. The characters are well developed, The author builds the scenes I feel I can see the what is being described. Not disturbing actions on the parts of the characters, this is nice and refreshing. The conflicts not larger than life and are small and believable with the children. Cons: Not many, just a few missing words now and there, just more editing and relisting (over and over, I get this). Nothing that is a deal breaker though. Overall: Took me about two hours to listen/read through the material. I It's a nice read. Will take time and add the next book to the series, just to see how this all plays out.
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timidon1
Jan 18, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Title : Razed Author : Crixi Category : Fantasy Inkitt : Why I am not a Vampire Tags : (Work in Progress) Pros : This book in the series is part of the origin story of the Vampire Goddess. We have a number of well defined characters, a truly disciple and hated villain. I give the author props making somebody I truly despite. A number of side characters are fleshed out and provide good support for our heroines motivations. Cons : The story is a bit dark. Overall : The setting is nice, you can see and feel where the author takes you. The hate, the attraction and the vengeance. In the overall arc within the series provides a good foundation support.😎
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timidon1
Jan 12, 2021
In Finished Reviews
Title : NARIO Author : Zo__RK Category : Action/Romance Inkitt : Why I am not in the Mafia Tags : (Work in Progress) (Review Swap:2020-01-11) Pros : Detailed Characters are a plus. Lively and Brutal as villains go, there is no shortage of supply, just pick the worst. The scenes are detailed, I can picture where the author has placed the reader. The story is constructed well enough. Cons : Punctuation took a hit, only because I recognized some of the same flaws in my own work, not a deal breaker. Overall: With only few chapters to work with, I don't know where the story is going yet. Much like nobles, arranged marriages and such, and a very unlucky gal who has to me married off to a crazy sob. This does leave me to want to punch Nario in the head. Happy Ending in a Mafia family? Only time will tell. More work is going to be needed, and this is a dark story to tread down. Violence can be found in a number of chapters, it's a tell of the criminals underworld, so be prepared.
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timidon1
Dec 31, 2020
In Finished Reviews
Title : One Night with Jolie Author : Linzvonc Category : Romance/Drama Inkitt : It's a small world! Pros : Just how much of a trainwreck can one watch, allot. Loved the story, it is nice to see some family values once in a while. Got plenty of adult scenes to add some spice for the readers. Cons : None that I can think of. Overall: True fantasy, I will be more than likely reading more of these. Fun story, characters are likable. Not too many men like Jax hanging around (that's why I say it's a true fantasy). A refreshing read with many fun moments. It's also nice to read all the comments by the gals reading the story, make sure you read each comment or you miss something. Just remember it is a small world after all.
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timidon1
Dec 14, 2020
In Current Reviews
Works in Progress, these are books or stories that are still in being written. When the final chapter is pinned I will post the review to Inkitt.
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timidon1
Dec 06, 2020
In Finished Reviews
Book : The Succubus Bond Authors Page : Rayna Crimson Inkitt Review Title : The Chimera Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Pros: Continuing on the story, Saraid is a very interesting Chimera, a creature that has different abilities. The more she bonds with the more powers she collects. More adult scenes, with some nice humor placed in as well. The writing is interesting enough to keep me turning chapters (coming from a horrible writer myself). Cons: I read this out of sequence in the series, Did not see a indication on the title that this is Book 2. Also Chapter 21 is missing (still),. Overall: Liked the story. Though the author is still working out the next book. Looking forward to the next installment. I will
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timidon1
Dec 06, 2020
In Finished Reviews
Book : Different Breed of Witch Authors Page : Rayna Crimson Inkitt Review Title : The Sexy Little Witch Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Pros: A interesting story, would make a fun movie as well (or mini series). Characters are different and likeable. Has just about the right amount of adult content to suit a few different tastes. The story could stand even without the extra edgy material. The story also reads well, I easily can follow the action and get into the characters heads. Cons: Not many I can see, off hand. I felt there was some jumping around on time and locations that I felt I got lost on. Also I read this out of sequence in the series, Did not see a indication on the title that this is Book 1. Overall: Liked the story, I read the seconded in the series first. Will and already have read the second in the series.
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timidon1
Nov 21, 2020
In Finished Reviews
Book : Psychic Authors Page : TS_Rose Inkitt Review Title : A mind is a terrible thing to waste Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Pros: Wow, good book and story. Characters are believable, not perfect or overpowered, and that is coming from somebody who enjoys writing overpowered characters. It has a diverse cast of characters. The story is memorable, has a bit of horror, mystery, and considering you have a group of psychics' probing minds, should make a who done it a snap. The writing is descriptive enough without being repetitive (something I struggle with). I Will have to wait for the next novel to see who else the group struggles against next. Cons: Not too many to think of. It does have a bit of political and racial bits that might raise an eyebrow for some readers. The story is set in modern times and the current disruption of political groups and factions. Last Thoughts: Good read, kept me turning pages, especially when building to the climax. It could make a good Netflix movie, though the only real expensive parts to produce would be the mental trips through people's heads.
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timidon1
Nov 16, 2020
In Finished Reviews
Book : The Last Magus Authors Page : Mavericks_Ghost Inkitt Review Title : My name is not Tim, it's just Joe. Overall Rating : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Plot: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Writing Style : 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Punctuation: : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Pros: Well just to start off with, this story has all the classic RPG elements in place. If you have been gaming for years, you will be right at home with the story. I usually have a hard time remembering characters and their names, who they are, and why they are even here. Not with this story, The characters are lively to say the least, each memorable in its own right. The set pieces are great, the shifting house is great! Cons: Lengthy and wordy. The descriptions are great (and mostly why I can remember them). The chapters are long. This is about the only bump I can see in the writing style. Overall: Has a good start to the series. You can find, comedy, love, and villains getting a bit of Karama rewards. I will be reading the next as well. @>-----------------------<@ Timidon Plays Exclusive Review @>-----------------------<@ Additional Comments: Looking forward to Draco get into some action, I am hoping another wizard rises to challenge Joe. The story is fun and lite hearted.
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timidon1
Nov 11, 2020
In Current Reviews
Review Swap Currently Reviewing Title : The Gathering Author : Gabriel Garcia Date Started : 2021-02-21 Date Finished : 2021- Next In Line: Accidental Passion by Ultimate
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timidon1
Nov 11, 2020
In Crossworlds
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